Zendaya Writing

Hi Guys,

This is my writing of Zendaya I had to do her because it was for our Literacy. I am very proud of my writing. It took some time to get it perfect put I still think I could do better. Also I have done a video so after you read this, you can scroll and then you will be able to see my video.

Here is my feed back from Mr Moriarty.

Well-structured letter. Just read through for spelling and punctuation.
Well done
Great use of a quote :)
Put a punctuation here.
Good introduction, Keighan.



  Dear Zendaya

My name is Keighan and I am  just turning 11. I live in Hastings New Zealand. You are really awesome and fun to watch, I am your biggest fan.

I have been your biggest fan since Shake it up I still love watching your programs especially K.c undercover. The first program I saw you in is  Shake it up. I am a big fan of you and Disney channel

you are such an awesome actress to me an other  people. I love you as an actress, you are beautiful in different ways.

Your amazing dancing inspired me to do dance club it makes me happy and also it is fun to do. It always encourages me to be myself I enjoy watching you dance on shake it up. Your amazing acting skills are awesome, you fit all  the parts really well.

I really connected when you starred in Zapped. I liked how it when  people underestimate you, you stood up and that’s what I like about you. I think that you are awesome to watch and zapped was an emotional movie. I have a lot of respect for you as you are  someone I look up to. What you did as a actress in  your performances on Zapped was amazing, especially the ardey amaze it was so extreme. It allowed me to think big. The characters you play are  amazing I love your films. It’s like you are a different person in each film. You're dancing is truly out there and fun. I love your quote ‘’ Believe in yourself’’.  

I would really appreciate if you send an email or autograph, to me if you don’t have time I will understand you will probably be so busy with your schedule if you get time I will be glad if you read it. Thank you for your amazing acting. Thank you for reading my letter  please send an email or a order graph I will leave my Info down below. Best luck in the future.

Sincerely, Keighan

Self-reflection

 Self-Reflection questions for reports
Hello people that are reading my blog right now you are in for your time of your life I am going to be talk about my school reflection so buckle your eyes on to the words to find out the things I like about Parkvale and rimu hub.
I am sharing this with you because this is the best reflection I have done.
I am proud of it because I got a really good comment on it from one of my teachers. Look down here to see the comment.

Fantastic reflecting on this Keighan. I am so proud of the learner you have become and the way you are stepping up as a leader this year. Great!

Please answer 6 of these questions in as much detail as possible. Be careful of your writing as this will go on your report. Delete the other questions.

1. What has been your highlight of the year so far? It is getting to be in rimu again because last year I enjoyed being in a learning Environment. Also getting  to be in rimu for my last year of primary.

2. What is your favorite thing about being in Rimu hub? Having extra teacher to go to for help.

3. What are you like as a learning buddy? I think I am helpful I give help and I go and get help from.

4. What is your biggest achievement this year and why? My biggest achievement is getting Three badges because  I have work hard for them.

5. What is it like so far in Rimu Hub? It is awesome to be in rimu not just because I’ve been in rimu for two years it’s because of the learning that goes around and I think I am going well in rimu.

6. What is you your favorite learning space and why? My Favorite learning space is the big room I think I work hard in that space.

Here are my questions all put together.
My favourite thing about Rimu hub is having an extra teacher to go to for help. As a learning buddy, I think I am helpful. I give help and I go and get help from others if I need it. My biggest achievement is getting my three badges because I have worked hard for them. It is awesome to be in Rimu, not just because I’ve been in Rimu for two years- it’s because of the learning that goes around and I think I am going well in Rimu. My favorite learning space is the big room. I think I work hard in that space and I like the collaborating we can do.

Reading task (I made video)

A Serious Game

Cheek This awesome Video out  

Our Video


WALT retell

You choose how you want to retell the legend:

• Writing in your book or on a doc
• Slideshow
• Audio
• Video
• Comic strip: digital or drawn
• Poster
• Animation
• Other?

Success Criteria:

• Has main characters
• Has main parts of the story
• In your own words

Hi I am blogging about my reading task this task is very fun because me and Mya Wallace made a video. I am sharing this to you because it is one of the best video I have done. I am proud of this because I did my personal best on it.
Please leave a comment down below.

I Proud

Hi! It's Keighan.

Here I am blogging about my iproud. I am sharing this to you because it is one of my best poems called a happy poem. I am proud of this because I did my personal best.

My most challenging bit was finding words to put in different parts.

My Best Learning by Keighan

This is my happy poem

I am proud of this because I did my personal best in this writing.

My biggest challenge was finding awesome words that would go with the topic.

HAPPY

It’s better than sports,

Better than nike footwear,

Having winter movie nights.

It's better than watching the All Blacks play,

Playing with my older siblings,

Having a delightful breakfast in the morning.

It’s better than doing flips on the tram,

Having midnight snacks ,

Exercising to keep fit.

It’s better than rubbing my cat's tummy,

Playing with my friends,

Exploring the outdoors.

I’M PLAYING NETBALL THIS YEAR!!

Tall Tale

Hello, it's Keighan. I am going to telling you about my tall tale.
A tall tale is about a true story. At the start and at the end of the story you can make a bit up like I saw a dragon.
I am proud of this because I did my personal best. I am sharing this to you because this is one of my best pieces of writing.

True story

I had one boring day at home so I decided to go to the park with my siblings I was doing cartwheels and handstands my brothers were passing the rugby ball around. Then my sister hurt herself by doing a back-bend “are you okay?” I said “ yes” said Baliee.  After Bailee heart herself. I sore a rainbow it was amazing.

I was feeling a bit fuzzy I rub my eyes look around I’m in the park then I am in a meadow with flowers I can see the end of a rainbow there is a pot of gold with a leprechaun  sleeping next to it.

Then I see a unicorn running down the rainbow It told me to hop on its back so I did. I was riding the unicorn up and down the rainbow I rub my eyes again I look at the unicorn it was not a unicorn it was my brother being a horse.

Japan 39;s New train

Hi guys, 

I am blogging about one of my personal best reading tasks. As you can see my reading task is about Invisible train. It travels at high speed. Inside, it will not feel like you are traveling at high speed.

I am very proud of my learning on this task. Now I know there really is An invisible train in the world.
I am shearing this to you because I did this to my personal best.

Japan's New Train Will Be "Invisible"

Read the article and watch the video.

WALT summaries information

Answer these questions:

What is Japan well-known for stat of the art high speed railway system

How does the Magnetic Levitation train get its name because it hovers 10cm off the tracks

What record did it break 375 mph

What is different about the new train being built colour size speed

Why does Seibu Railway wish to build it? 100th anniversary

Who is the architect responsible for the design? Designing a stationary building

Why was the train's route perfect for this design? Because It turned out good

What will the interior of the train be like? Awesome

Critical Thinking Challenge

Do you think high-speed railways could replace domestic air travel in the future? Why or why not? No because  you will to use a lot of money to pay of it with that money we should just give some money to cancer kids.

I PROUD 1

I am proud of my learning task because this is my best writing so far this year. I am sharing this with you because I am really proud of it and I want to share it so other people will enjoy my writing.

My Best Learning

This is my… Scene Description

As I hear the cluttering noise from the waterfall I run to the noise. Then I stop and look at the most beautiful view of the waterfall. The native smell from the trees and bushes glides past my nose . As the sun set’s  the sun is  gazing across the waterfall. As I dip my hand into the the glistening water, it makes me feel alive. As I look closely I can see leveled rocks making a little waterfall. There is a curved cliff that is making the most amazing  waterfall I have ever seen. The crystal clear river rushes to go past the smaller waterfall then it goes calm like a cat sleeping. As the colourful cloud slowly makes its way to the other side of the world. As I fall asleep slowly I can hear the water slowly calming down.

I am proud of this because I put my personal best into my description. As you can see I put in my senses into my writing. That is why I am proud of my scene description.

My biggest challenge was trying to put in more improve words so my writing could pop out more.

My Poem

I am proud of this because I put lots of effort into it.

I did this because it was something that i was proud and it is my best poem yet.

?WALT choose words appropriate to writing purpose

Purpose: To Entertain

Text Type: Poem (Model)

Our Success Criteria

• Use of adjective-noun with hyphen e.g. tall-story, biscuit-mugger
• Change line after after every idea
• Ideas are short - two or three well-chosen words
• Use some alliteration e.g. full-of-fib fever
• Use some rhyming (Try Rhyme Zone)
• Be true about the subject
• Select line starters carefully (a variety)

My Dad

He’s a:

Coffee-mugger

Big hugger

food lover

Likes to discover

Kind of tall

hates the mall

Always an entertainer

Funny joker

Such a hard-worker

Also a smirker

Loves his sleep

His clothes are cheap

Very strong

‘LEAVING ME’ is his favourite song

Rugby mad

Soccer sad

So glad I have

my DAD!

My Character Description

Last week for my writing I was doing a character description about my Brother Julian.
I am proud of this because It was about one of my family member and I put lots of effort into it.
I did this because I am proud of it and I recon it is one of my best writing.

Julian My Brother

Physical Description	Character Traits	Actions
Short Muscly Black hair Brown eyes Bold clothing	Ignoring Playful Funny Self confident	Sports Rugby Touch Ripper rugby Julian is very fast

WALT choose words that give the reader a vivid picture in their head

Purpose: To Entertain

Text Type: Character Description

My Writing Goal: Use full stops, capital letters, question marks, and exclamation marks correctly.

Success Criteria:

• Shows physical description
• Shows character traits and actions
• Organised into correct sentences and paragraphs - intro / physical / traits / actions / ending
• Strong nouns, verbs and adjectives
• Uses a good simile and can use other language features effectively
• Has an entertaining anecdote (little story that happened) about the character

Julian AKA My Brother

My brother Julian is a self confident  person who is crazy about sports.

He doesn't care what people think about him. He is a kind  to people he knows.

Julian has black hair and a big sense of humour. He is short but muscular, he is Maori. Julian lives with my dad and my bigger brother Aston also my cousin EJ. He cooks for my dad and me. Julian cleans up after him and recently he went up on a farm for docking  to earn money for him to spend or save.  He has brown bold eyes when you are far back you can still see his eyes. And Julian has bold clothing.

My brother can be a pain in the back side but he is still a loving brother to me. He is very playful with me we would play held at the park sometimes. Julian is very funny to his friends and family. He gets his funniness from my dad.

He’s annoying  because when I’m asleep he would wake me up and scare me.

Julian is a fast person when he was at primary school he was the fastest in the school. Rugby is his favorite sport because he made it in the under 14teens rugby team from Hastings boys high school.

When Julian was at primary school he made it to the Hawke's Bay under 11 touch team. Also when Julian was at primary there was a ripper tournament whoever won that went to the world's ripper tournament in Auckland they won so they went to Auckland  He was a year five when he went. And the coach of the team is my teacher Mr Moriarty.

My brother is the best brother in the world. If you meet him, you will know why.

By Keighan

Jamie Curry Video / Script and Report

       
My video is called Forgot My Clothes.     I have done a video about Jamie Curry. She is a comedic actress she is not afraid to make fun of herself.

We are leaning to find out how she is and what she loves. I have a report about her and a script about the video to what to say. I did this because it was something I was proud of.
My Script 
 Forgot my Clothes

Setting: She at her just got there went out side in the back yard.

Mood: Angry

Character: Jamie

props: mud

She has left home and her mum sees the suitcase next to her and runs but can't get to her.

This is about when Jamie falls into mud outside in her backyard and just remind that she left her suitcase at her mums.

Mum: Jamie have a good flight. Make sure you pay the power bill and the rent.

Jamie: Yes mum, now I am going.

Mum: Okay get in.

Tayla: Bye sis!

Jamie: I'm going on a trip in this little taxi..

Jamie: Im here, wow, look at this back yard.

Jamie: Ow there is mud all over me. I am going to change my clothes.

Jamie: Where is my suitcase?

Mum Jamie’s suitcase is here.  Oh thats a doozy!

Mum: I better call her.

Jamie: Jamie here, hi who is this?

Mum: It is your mum, you forgot your clothes.

Jamie: This is my world, It sucks to be a adult.

Jamie: This is Jamie’s word.

My Report

Jamie Curry

Introduction

Jamie Curry is a Comedian. She lifted herself to be one of the best teenagers in New Zealand by making fun of herself. Jamie is not afraid to make fun of herself. She attended Sacred Heart College. She is now  19 years old. She is a Hawke’s Bay local woman. This lady is self deprecating. She  became Famous  on a Facebook page.

Her Life

Jamie  has a mum and dad, also a younger sister called Tayla. She has moved to Auckland. Within all the videos she has made one about when she was moving to Auckland. She started her big life off when she went to Sacred Heart College. After school she had a soccer practice  and her team convinced her to have a Facebook page for them to watch her.

Youtube Fame

This artist spends 2 hours sending emails back to her fans. People think Jamie has funny photos and videos on Facebook and Youtube also Twitter. She is now  19 years old. This teenager  is a Hawke’s Bay local woman. This lady is self deprecating. She started her life on a Facebook page.

Other successes

Jamie has got young New Zealander of the year in 2013, the same year that Lorde got nominated.  Next year she will be touring the UK for a British boy band.  Doing a music video to make people laugh is what Jamie likes doing . She thought that she would only get 100 likes in her videos but she was pleasantly surprised.

Conclusion

Jamie wants to tour Hollywood to see what actors do in their life so that she knows what to do. This teenager is not any teenager! This young  lady is a super star.

Written By Keighan