Thursday, June 9, 2016

Tall Tale

Hello, it's Keighan. I am going to telling you about my tall tale.
A tall tale is about a true story. At the start and at the end of the story you can make a bit up like I saw a dragon.
I am proud of this because I did my personal best. I am sharing this to you because this is one of my best pieces of writing.

True story
I had one boring day at home so I decided to go to the park with my siblings I was doing cartwheels and handstands my brothers were passing the rugby ball around. Then my sister hurt herself by doing a back-bend “are you okay?” I said “ yes” said Baliee.  After Bailee heart herself. I sore a rainbow it was amazing.


I was feeling a bit fuzzy I rub my eyes look around I’m in the park then I am in a meadow with flowers I can see the end of a rainbow there is a pot of gold with a leprechaun  sleeping next to it.
Then I see a unicorn running down the rainbow It told me to hop on its back so I did. I was riding the unicorn up and down the rainbow I rub my eyes again I look at the unicorn it was not a unicorn it was my brother being a horse.

Friday, May 27, 2016

Japan 39;s New train

Hi guys, 


I am blogging about one of my personal best reading tasks. As you can see my reading task is about Invisible train. It travels at high speed. Inside, it will not feel like you are traveling at high speed.

I am very proud of my learning on this task. Now I know there really is An invisible train in the world.
I am shearing this to you because I did this to my personal best.



Japan's New Train Will Be "Invisible"



Read the article and watch the video.


WALT summaries information


Answer these questions:


What is Japan well-known for stat of the art high speed railway system


How does the Magnetic Levitation train get its name because it hovers 10cm off the tracks


What record did it break 375 mph
What is different about the new train being built colour size speed


Why does Seibu Railway wish to build it? 100th anniversary


Who is the architect responsible for the design? Designing a stationary building
Why was the train's route perfect for this design? Because It turned out good


What will the interior of the train be like? Awesome

Critical Thinking Challenge

Do you think high-speed railways could replace domestic air travel in the future? Why or why not? No because  you will to use a lot of money to pay of it with that money we should just give some money to cancer kids.

Thursday, May 26, 2016

Estimating

This is my Maths task I am sharing this to you because I am very proud of it 
I am proud of this because I finished it on time.




This is my maths task we had to estimate and measurement  the correct length or height I learn what was estimate in the maths taskIMG_0355.JPGk.


My estimate for my height is 4.3 you can’t really see the dot.

Wednesday, May 11, 2016

Free Choice Description

Hi guys,

I am blogging about my free choice writing because it is very interesting and I am proud of it.  I am sharing this to you because I love writing it is one of my favorite subject. 


FREE CHOICE DESCRIPTION
Purpose: to describe
WALT: create content with clear and interesting details
Success Criteria:
  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)
  • Stays on the topic (of describing for the reader)
  • Uses the present tense

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As I turn around slowly I see this mysterious shack with a foggy waterfall. The moss is covered around the rocks. The trees behind the shack are like a big long stick going up to the sky. The shack looks like it is going to collapse to the ground. I feel like I am in my own place here. This green place is amazing; it looks like a never ending forest. I hear the water clustering over the rocks. I see this amazing sight I have ever seen before. I am going to keep this place to myself.



Tuesday, April 5, 2016

I PROUD 1

I am proud of my learning task because this is my best writing so far this year. I am sharing this with you because I am really proud of it and I want to share it so other people will enjoy my writing.
My Best Learning


This is my… Scene Description
As I hear the cluttering noise from the waterfall I run to the noise. Then I stop and look at the most beautiful view of the waterfall. The native smell from the trees and bushes glides past my nose . As the sun set’s  the sun is  gazing across the waterfall. As I dip my hand into the the glistening water, it makes me feel alive. As I look closely I can see leveled rocks making a little waterfall. There is a curved cliff that is making the most amazing  waterfall I have ever seen. The crystal clear river rushes to go past the smaller waterfall then it goes calm like a cat sleeping. As the colourful cloud slowly makes its way to the other side of the world. As I fall asleep slowly I can hear the water slowly calming down.


I am proud of this because I put my personal best into my description. As you can see I put in my senses into my writing. That is why I am proud of my scene description.

My biggest challenge was trying to put in more improve words so my writing could pop out more.

Wednesday, March 16, 2016

My Favorite Book task

Hi my name is Keighan,
I am going to be talking about My favorite book task. This book is called Too Many Secrets. This is one of my favorite books to read. I am very proud of my writing because I put my very best into this writing. I am sharing this with you because  it is a very good book to read and I put my hardest into this writing. The author of the book is Adele Broadbent. 
Thank you for reading my blog. Please comment down below.

   

Weet-bix triathlon

Hi blog readers,


It is Keighan here and I am going to be talking about my Weet-bix triathlon that happened Thursday the 18 of February. I saw a lot of people that I have not seen in a long time. This year was my first year of doing the Weet-Bix triathlon. I am proud of what I have achieved. My favorite thing about the Weet-Bix triathlon was that all the things I had won that day and doing the triathlon with Liske. The Weet-bix triathlon was not about winning it was about giving it a try. My number for the triathlon was 125528. When I got my T-shirt, it also came with a tog bag with a list on the back. It had a form that told me where to go. I am sharing this with you because I tried hard to get to the finish. At the end of the race we got given a medal  and also a cup of water. We had to take a photo with your medal. At the end of all of it I was puffed.  




Here is a photo at the end of the Weet-Bix triathlon