My Character Description

Last week for my writing I was doing a character description about my Brother Julian.
I am proud of this because It was about one of my family member and I put lots of effort into it.
I did this because I am proud of it and I recon it is one of my best writing.

Julian My Brother

Physical Description	Character Traits	Actions
Short Muscly Black hair Brown eyes Bold clothing	Ignoring Playful Funny Self confident	Sports Rugby Touch Ripper rugby Julian is very fast

WALT choose words that give the reader a vivid picture in their head

Purpose: To Entertain

Text Type: Character Description

My Writing Goal: Use full stops, capital letters, question marks, and exclamation marks correctly.

Success Criteria:

• Shows physical description
• Shows character traits and actions
• Organised into correct sentences and paragraphs - intro / physical / traits / actions / ending
• Strong nouns, verbs and adjectives
• Uses a good simile and can use other language features effectively
• Has an entertaining anecdote (little story that happened) about the character

Julian AKA My Brother

My brother Julian is a self confident  person who is crazy about sports.

He doesn't care what people think about him. He is a kind  to people he knows.

Julian has black hair and a big sense of humour. He is short but muscular, he is Maori. Julian lives with my dad and my bigger brother Aston also my cousin EJ. He cooks for my dad and me. Julian cleans up after him and recently he went up on a farm for docking  to earn money for him to spend or save.  He has brown bold eyes when you are far back you can still see his eyes. And Julian has bold clothing.

My brother can be a pain in the back side but he is still a loving brother to me. He is very playful with me we would play held at the park sometimes. Julian is very funny to his friends and family. He gets his funniness from my dad.

He’s annoying  because when I’m asleep he would wake me up and scare me.

Julian is a fast person when he was at primary school he was the fastest in the school. Rugby is his favorite sport because he made it in the under 14teens rugby team from Hastings boys high school.

When Julian was at primary school he made it to the Hawke's Bay under 11 touch team. Also when Julian was at primary there was a ripper tournament whoever won that went to the world's ripper tournament in Auckland they won so they went to Auckland  He was a year five when he went. And the coach of the team is my teacher Mr Moriarty.

My brother is the best brother in the world. If you meet him, you will know why.

By Keighan