I am proud of this because I put lots of effort into it.
I did this because it was something that i was proud and it is my best poem yet.
?WALT choose words appropriate to writing purpose
Purpose: To Entertain
Our Success Criteria
- Use of adjective-noun with hyphen e.g. tall-story, biscuit-mugger
- Change line after after every idea
- Ideas are short - two or three well-chosen words
- Use some alliteration e.g. full-of-fib fever
- Be true about the subject
- Select line starters carefully (a variety)
My Dad
He’s a:
Coffee-mugger
Big hugger
food lover
Likes to discover
Kind of tall
hates the mall
Always an entertainer
Funny joker
Such a hard-worker
Also a smirker
Loves his sleep
His clothes are cheap
Very strong
‘LEAVING ME’ is his favourite song
Rugby mad
Soccer sad
So glad I have
my DAD!
I like poems!
ReplyDeleteWow I love it good work
ReplyDeleteYou did an awesome poem keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteI love your poem and great rhyming words.
ReplyDeleteVICTORIA
Wow I really like your poem it is really catchy and you can turn it into a song. It is cool.
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