Thursday, June 23, 2016

Reading task (I made video)

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WALT retell


You choose how you want to retell the legend:
  • Writing in your book or on a doc
  • Slideshow
  • Audio
  • Video
  • Comic strip: digital or drawn
  • Poster
  • Animation
  • Other?


Success Criteria:
  • Has main characters
  • Has main parts of the story
  • In your own words

Hi I am blogging about my reading task this task is very fun because me and Mya Wallace made a video. I am sharing this to you because it is one of the best video I have done. I am proud of this because I did my personal best on it.
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Friday, June 17, 2016

I Proud

Hi! It's Keighan.
Here I am blogging about my iproud. I am sharing this to you because it is one of my best poems called a happy poem. I am proud of this because I did my personal best.
My most challenging bit was finding words to put in different parts.

My Best Learning by Keighan


This is my happy poem


I am proud of this because I did my personal best in this writing.


My biggest challenge was finding awesome words that would go with the topic.


HAPPY


It’s better than sports,
Better than nike footwear,
Having winter movie nights.


It's better than watching the All Blacks play,
Playing with my older siblings,
Having a delightful breakfast in the morning.


It’s better than doing flips on the tram,
Having midnight snacks ,
Exercising to keep fit.


It’s better than rubbing my cat's tummy,
Playing with my friends,
Exploring the outdoors.

I’M PLAYING NETBALL THIS YEAR!!

Thursday, June 9, 2016

Tall Tale

Hello, it's Keighan. I am going to telling you about my tall tale.
A tall tale is about a true story. At the start and at the end of the story you can make a bit up like I saw a dragon.
I am proud of this because I did my personal best. I am sharing this to you because this is one of my best pieces of writing.

True story
I had one boring day at home so I decided to go to the park with my siblings I was doing cartwheels and handstands my brothers were passing the rugby ball around. Then my sister hurt herself by doing a back-bend “are you okay?” I said “ yes” said Baliee.  After Bailee heart herself. I sore a rainbow it was amazing.


I was feeling a bit fuzzy I rub my eyes look around I’m in the park then I am in a meadow with flowers I can see the end of a rainbow there is a pot of gold with a leprechaun  sleeping next to it.
Then I see a unicorn running down the rainbow It told me to hop on its back so I did. I was riding the unicorn up and down the rainbow I rub my eyes again I look at the unicorn it was not a unicorn it was my brother being a horse.