Monday, November 7, 2016

My Writing, Comparing and contrasting

What is up,
So today I will be sharing my comparing and contrasting. The two animals I picked are a Cougar and Lioness.
I am sharing this with you because I did to my personal best. I am proud of this because it  I enjoyed searching up facts and putting them into a essay.

Here is my writing 
Essay Success Criteria
  • Uses scientific vocabulary
  • Revised and edited
  • Accurate paragraphs with subheadings
  • Essay structure followed
  • No personal pronouns
  • Factual
  • Detailed ideas
  • Sentences- different lengths and beginnings
  • Optional personal goal

Comparing Cougar and Lioness

In some ways Cougar and Lioness are very similar, but   they are still different to one another.  You may think that they are very similar but in fact they have there own unique qualities.


The Cougar and a Lioness are very similar. They both kill large herbivores and digest meat. ( eats meat) They eat deer and other kinds of animals. They both hunt in groups but the lioness hunt in larger groups. Alos they hunt the same way by  locking their jaws around the necks of their prey and claws and they both put them in a death lock.

Not only that, they are very similar to one another in other ways too. Here Is one fact: they have the same fur colour. The colour’s name is sandy brown. They don’t have hair like humans, they have fur.

Both Cat’s give birth to their young, and there cub’s feed from their  mother's milk. These Cat’s normally give birth up to four cubs. Both cat’s give birth to their young around the same age.


This animal  lives in the savannah, in prides. There is a larger group of females in the pride. But not only that this animal is very Iconic of all the cats in it’s pride. This animal is jungle royalty to the jungle animals. Hunting, this is what is the weird part  because the females are the ones that go hunting while the male lions look after the cubs.
They can come into heat at any time in the day. When they are going to have birth they move away from the pride and then give. They go back to the pride after 4 days that the cubs or cub has been born.

This animal is also known as a mountain lion, Puma and Cougar. The Cougar is found mostly in the american habitat, Here is one interesting fact is that a Cougar Has the loudest purr. Hiking they hike in small  groups in hunting. Also these animals are  very energetic because they can leap up to  up to 30 feet.

This cat is the second largest cat after the tiger there weight is up to 70 and 150 pounds.
And the cougar height is up to 60-90cm up to shoulder for a adult. The female length of 2 meters and a male is up to 2.4 meters.


A cougar and a Lioness are very similar but not Identical.

Thanks for reading, please leave a comment.

1 comment:

  1. WOW! That is a very well written piece of writing. You must of learnt heaps from all the research and it is very well set out. You did awesome writing this essay. I know how hard it was because I wrote one too and it takes ages and it is very tricky. Keep up the great work Keighan!!