Tuesday, August 9, 2016

Zendaya Writing

Hi Guys,

This is my writing of Zendaya I had to do her because it was for our Literacy. I am very proud of my writing. It took some time to get it perfect put I still think I could do better. Also I have done a video so after you read this, you can scroll and then you will be able to see my video.

Here is my feed back from Mr Moriarty.

Well-structured letter. Just read through for spelling and punctuation.
Well done
Great use of a quote :)
Put a punctuation here.
Good introduction, Keighan.

  Dear Zendaya

My name is Keighan and I am  just turning 11. I live in Hastings New Zealand. You are really awesome and fun to watch, I am your biggest fan.

I have been your biggest fan since Shake it up I still love watching your programs especially K.c undercover. The first program I saw you in is  Shake it up. I am a big fan of you and Disney channel
you are such an awesome actress to me an other  people. I love you as an actress, you are beautiful in different ways.
Your amazing dancing inspired me to do dance club it makes me happy and also it is fun to do. It always encourages me to be myself I enjoy watching you dance on shake it up. Your amazing acting skills are awesome, you fit all  the parts really well.

I really connected when you starred in Zapped. I liked how it when  people underestimate you, you stood up and that’s what I like about you. I think that you are awesome to watch and zapped was an emotional movie. I have a lot of respect for you as you are  someone I look up to. What you did as a actress in  your performances on Zapped was amazing, especially the ardey amaze it was so extreme. It allowed me to think big. The characters you play are  amazing I love your films. It’s like you are a different person in each film. You're dancing is truly out there and fun. I love your quote ‘’ Believe in yourself’’.  

I would really appreciate if you send an email or autograph, to me if you don’t have time I will understand you will probably be so busy with your schedule if you get time I will be glad if you read it. Thank you for your amazing acting. Thank you for reading my letter  please send an email or a order graph I will leave my Info down below. Best luck in the future.

Sincerely, Keighan


 Self-Reflection questions for reports
Hello people that are reading my blog right now you are in for your time of your life I am going to be talk about my school reflection so buckle your eyes on to the words to find out the things I like about Parkvale and rimu hub.
I am sharing this with you because this is the best reflection I have done.
I am proud of it because I got a really good comment on it from one of my teachers. Look down here to see the comment.

Fantastic reflecting on this Keighan. I am so proud of the learner you have become and the way you are stepping up as a leader this year. Great!

Please answer 6 of these questions in as much detail as possible. Be careful of your writing as this will go on your report. Delete the other questions.

  1. What has been your highlight of the year so far? It is getting to be in rimu again because last year I enjoyed being in a learning Environment. Also getting  to be in rimu for my last year of primary.

  1. What is your favorite thing about being in Rimu hub? Having extra teacher to go to for help.

  1. What are you like as a learning buddy? I think I am helpful I give help and I go and get help from.

  1. What is your biggest achievement this year and why? My biggest achievement is getting Three badges because  I have work hard for them.

  1. What is it like so far in Rimu Hub? It is awesome to be in rimu not just because I’ve been in rimu for two years it’s because of the learning that goes around and I think I am going well in rimu.

  1. What is you your favorite learning space and why? My Favorite learning space is the big room I think I work hard in that space.
Here are my questions all put together.
My favourite thing about Rimu hub is having an extra teacher to go to for help. As a learning buddy, I think I am helpful. I give help and I go and get help from others if I need it. My biggest achievement is getting my three badges because I have worked hard for them. It is awesome to be in Rimu, not just because I’ve been in Rimu for two years- it’s because of the learning that goes around and I think I am going well in Rimu. My favorite learning space is the big room. I think I work hard in that space and I like the collaborating we can do.

July Holidays

Hi guys,
 I have just got back from my amazing holiday. I went to a lot of places and I am going to tell you all about. I might put some pictures for you to look at.

My favorite part of my holidays is going to Elsthorpe to see all my family. I saw aunts, uncles and cousins. I spent the night at Saph's (My cousins) house. The next morning we went to my aunty Horoure's house to have breakfast. We had lamb tails. If you did not want to have lamb tails, you could have bacon and scrambled eggs. I shared a lamb tail with my sister, then ate some scrambled eggs and bacon (mmm).

I got a brand new scooter for my birthday. I have a blue and gold scooter from Hustle.
Also  in the holidays  I went to the skate park to ride on it. Bailee my sister is getting a new scooter from Hustle as well. I enjoyed going to the stake park. I learnt how to do a lot of things and I saw Mrs Love and Jono there too.

I had done things that were awesome in the holidays and meet some new family members that I did not know about. I had a awesome time in the holiday and I hope you guys did. Thanks for reading my  blog post scroll down to see more of my posts.

I am going to give a congrats for my cousin Sarah Goss, she is going to the Olympics for women's rugby sevens team as there captain.
Here is a photo of her.

 Sarah Goss